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Mr North – Creative Writing from Richard Parker – Hw – Life of Pi

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Point of View: Richard Parker

Setting: On boat with Pi

Tense: 1st Person

Companion(s): Pi

Rooooaaaaar….. Oh sorry where my manners, my name if you will is in Richard Parker and im a tiger well I know what your thinking what has can a Tiger talk well im special well as special as can be.

What else should I say? Well for starter im on a boat in the middle of tim buck too with my campanion pi who has been scared of me sofar but havibg said that iam hungry and well I would mind a snack for starters at least

This situation has been a catastrophe and I has only occoured because of a ship wrecking amyway must dash as I need to get back to being Scaryyyyy… ( Just Joking ) ) Bye.

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    jnorth

    Hello Lethaniel,

    You have covered what you feel to be Richard Parker’s major emotions, but I think it is interesting that you have tried to give the tiger a sense of humour. Was this something deliberate? If so, can you say why you have done this?

    I have seen your sentence structures a little more accurate than this – where should your full stops and commas be?

    Thanks,

    Mr North

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